Story Title: (5/5)

The title is good!

Description/Summary/Foreword: (4/5)

The description was okay.

Story Plot/Originality: (8/10)

YESH I liked the plot! Not really original though.

Flow: (10/10)

I know this is a one shot, but it had a nice flow to it. Nothing hard to understand.

Grammar/Spelling: (9/10)

‘He drove you further and further without saying a word and finally he pullovered infront of an empty shop.’ ‘pullovered’ should be ‘pulled over’ and ‘in front’ are two different words.

“Gosh that smile, it still make my heart flutter” ‘make’ should be ‘makes’.

“3 months in the states felt like a day to me” I think you made a typo or did you really mean to use day?

“Well,…since we haven’t seen each other for quiet some time,..’ I think you mean ‘quite’ not ‘quiet’.

“But why did you broke off the kiss earlier!?” ‘broke’ should be ‘break’.

Enjoyment: (9/10)

I don’t really like stories that have ____ in it because it gets kinda annoying tbh. I still like this one shot!

Total: (45/50)

Would I recommend it?: Yeah. So Christmas-y!~

OMG This was so cute and fluffy!! >.<

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