Reviewed by Lynelle

Title 8/10

Your title's nice but, it's kinda cliche. However, it matches your story well so you don't need to make any alterations :)

Foreword and Description 7/10
The description is good, and it's a nice introduction. It doesn't expose the whole story and it's not that short either. But the foreword seems to be going all over the place. I think it would be better if you placed the characters first before your note.(author's note) Also, you can have the characters' datas or description in bullet form if you don't want to provide sentences.

eg.

Nam Ka Eun (you)

▪ 16 years old

▪ has a huge crush on Jungkook

▪ Stubborn

▪ kind

Plot 18/20
Since it's a smut, your readers should really enjoy it :P And I did. The plot is quite common though. I've read a lot of fics that has the same plot. So my suggestion is for you to add some twists on the upcoming chapters to make your story unique.

Flow and Execution 18/20
Everything is expressed and executed at the right time. I admire the italicized words there that shows what the character thinks and it's good that you don't need to have someone's POV in order to make the readers feel the whole situation in your story.

Spelling and Grammar 14/20
You should improve on your punctuations. A lot of them are wrong. You shouldn't put a comma ( , ) after a period ( . ) and a question mark ( ? ) Also, you should place a comma instead of periods on your description. And another thing is the capitalization. Here's the correct thing to do with your description:

This is the only part that I was able to correct, sorry. Just find the other mistakes yourself. (I'm talking about the chapters here)

Overall enjoyment 19/20
I'm enjoying the story so far. But I can't put 20 since that one point is always for improvement. Keep it up!

Final score 81/100